Chapter One: Part One
Here is your order Adelaide said placing the food on table and walks off. Violetta enters with a smirk.
Hey my shift is about to begin Ill take over. She says putting on an apron.
Thanks Adelaide yells running to her car.
Driving off with a grave gaze. Driving at a swift pace onto a road into the looming forest. Slowing down she goes to a halt and gets out. Glancing up she spots a girl pointing her gun to a black bag.
Sorry I'm late Adelaide said taking out a pack of matches.
This isnt easy ya know. Lucia remarked with a smile.
Well its easy to finish. Lets get this done with. Im going to miss my show. Adelaide remarked back as Lucia pushed the bag into the ditch and pours gasoline.
Adelaide and Lucia take a few steps back as Adelaide throws a match into the pit. A large fire bursts and the flames soar.
See wasnt that easy Adelaide says walking from the fire.
Thats cuz it was easy. I had to do the dirty work, Lucia scoffed looking back at the fire.
Ill do the dirty work next time. Or Ill have Violetta do it. Adelaide says getting into the car.
Fine. Lucia says getting into her car.
Lucia murmurs as the car starts I'm going to miss her a little wont I?
Chapter One: Part Two
Hey everyone! Did you hear what happened? Ryou said walking toward Adelaide, Violetta, and Lucia sitting in their desks.
No what happened? Lucia asked trying not to smile.
Meiko died last night! He screamed with a freighted look. All three of the girls began crying.
The police say she committed suicide. She apparently was trying to kill herself so she lit herself on fire then shot her self. The police found a gun with her prints on it by the area. He said quickly and mournfully.
I cant believe this happened! She did seem a little sad before didnt she? Violetta said with care. They take their seats and every one talks in the crowd as Violetta, Lucia and Adelaide share a quick glace and nod.
After class Katsuro heads to the café to talk to his friends. He sits with a frown when he hears the topic.
She was very sad that week. I guess it wasnt impossible to happen. All look down. Adelaide comes and fills glasses then tops them with whipped cream.
Shes in a better place. Adelaide says mournfully. She would want us to carry on and be happy. She says with a smirk looking at Lucia.
I guess your right Lucia says.
Well I have to meet with the manager. Ill be back soon. She says leaving.
Why does she have to meet with her boss? Ryou said looking up.
She is helping make the signature special. She is very creative when it comes to food. Violetta gets up, followed by Lucia
We have to go buy flowers for the grave.
Ill come too. Katsuro suggests. Lucia stiffens and turns to face him.
We dont want you to see us so sad, well be fine. Then both girls leave. Ryou only shrugs as Katsuro gives him a weird look.
Chapter One: Part Three
That was close. Violetta says once they started driving.
Yeah, do you have the evidence? Violetta says. Lucia smiles holding up an envelope.
Ok so burn it then throw out the ashes. Violetta says now holding the envelope in her hand. Lucia gets out of the car and goes into her backyard with a plastic bag in hand.
Marshmallows? Violetta says with a grin.
Yup, we need to look normal dont we? Lucia says lighting a fire.
I guess so. Violetta drops the envelope into the fire. They sit back and watch it burn.
So you then put the strawberries on top and its done. Adelaide stands back and looks at a cake with strawberries and whipped cream on top.
Its perfect. Ill get it on the menu. You may leave. The boss says taking a bite of the cake and smiling. Adelaide grabs her keys and walks out the back door to her car. As she drives home she calls Lucia
Is it gone? Adelaide says into phone.
Yea, and we have marshmallows! Lucia says cheerfully.
Great. Now we can relax for a bit hopefully. Adelaide says with a sigh.
These Marshmallows are delicious! Well bye! Lucia says hanging up. Adelaide sits back in her seat,
Everything is going perfectly. She says with an evil grin.















Comments
Very dark but intense.
However, cause I'm a perfectionist I have a few niffy things to point out.
Some puncuation problems like a ' , ' after someones speach before the closing ' " ' Yu put a full stop, which isn't the way way. It isn't needed when exlamation marks or questions marks are there.
Maybe to slow down and use some description paragraphs?
Yu know? It seems to be going a little too fast, if yu want that intense atmosphere. I'll note yu a version of my paragraph here. I'm not trying to be a snotty wotnot
I have a deal as well to take yes?
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